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What have you learned from your audience feedback?
“Good diegetic audio at [the] start” “I like the diegetic sound at the beginning”
“Good motion track” “Nice intro shots”
“[I] like the reflection ripple effect but it’s not obvious enough”
“The slow pace in the extreme close-ups were nice and it goes with the song” “[The editing] matched the tempo of the song well”
“The performance looked convincing” “It actually looked like he was singing” “Great screen presence in the performance”
“Good use of handheld camera shots”
“Camera angles during scenes with couple and the continuity was smooth, but [you] could add P.O.V shots during the boat scenes”
“Depth of field and pull focus was great” “[At] the end when she leaves, [the] pull focus was effective” “I love the shot where she walks away”
“I liked the symbolism of autumn to winter [showing] decaying to dead” “The changing seasons idea isn’t clear. It makes her gloves disappearing look like a continuity error.”
“The camera shakes a lot in one chorus” “The camera movements are shaky sometimes” “In the second chorus, Ben is not lit as well”
“Clear narrative” “Nice storyline” “A good understanding of the genre”
“Performance in ‘chunks’ / sometimes not mixed with the narrative” “The capo disappears at one point”
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